Saturday, February 16, 2008

history homework

My name is George Bush. I was born at 1500 in England. I died at 1600 in Italy that I was 100 years old. My whole life was in the period of Renaissance and so I became a writer and an artist.

I had been many countries in my life. I sold my picture and ideas in those countries I had been. I had many friends that famous in the world such as William Shakespeare and Leonardo da Vinci. I made discussion on the freedom and religion always with my friends. When we had a new idea or opinions, we would tell the others by art, including architecture and sculptures. Obviously, my day job was writing poems and drawing pictures.

I thought all artists including me had been doing a good job on popularizing the importance of freedom. And the others could be disenchanted by us. I thought we should not listen to the religionist or the rich or powerful people. We wanted the people have their own ideas and became more scientific.

1 comment:

Wootang01 said...

Is George Bush a writer and an artist; or is he a philosopher?

Judging by the narrative you present, he talks and discusses more than he produces (works of art). It's interesting to note that he enjoys science over religion, which is not what the current incarnation of George Bush would enjoy; he prefers the latter over the former.

You used a good deal of content area vocabulary; the problem is, however, putting those words together seamlessly using grammar.

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